May 14, 2005
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First poem is from 1968, and already you can see my nuttiness in it!
“Flower-Child”
Sitting on my ass
Just a smoking grass
And watching the clouds in the sky drifting past.
Happy to laze
In an euphoric haze
Wishing the day will forever last.
I close my eyes and I sleep
Not too heavy and sure not too deep
Just listening to bird-song
Letting my thoughts drift along
And the hours by slowly creep.
What a wonderful place
With the sun on my face
And the big unicorns
With their long sexy horns
Made to please the human race.
—
Terry.
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Moving on:
One of my first jobs on the paper was reporting on a building site where archologists were working. This story is thus true.
“At the Dig.”
“If these bones could talk,”
The old man sighed.
“What will they say?”
He held the skeleton as if
It was a lover,
And he sighed again.
“See the ribs have been crushed
As if the poor soul
Was kicked to death.”
He performed the sign of the cross
And gently placed the skeleton
Back into its grave.
Up in the sky
I could hear
The rumble of thunder.
—-
Terry.
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Another poem wrote about real people I met in my job and like the above I did not so much “write” it as turned a real incident into a poem.
“Free-verse Sonnet.”
A mad man with a beard
Plays at aeroplanes
In the background
Of the home-cum-cafe
Where a red-faced mother
Serves us our teas.
We say nothing
We do not even comment upon
The inclement weather.
We drink in silence,
As the screams of the demented man
Mingle with the soft tears
On the old woman’s face.
—
Terry
The following is about my cousin, they told her her mother (my auntie) was feeling better, she drove 200 miles to be by her bedside, but on arrival found she had passed away.
“The Bereaved”
They lead her crying
From the hospital office;
The flowers that she was to give
To an old lady
Were still grasped in her hands.
Outside, it was a beautiful day,
And children were singing
The very same songs
That her mother had taught her
So many years ago.
—
Terry.
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Finally, a poem wrote this week after leaving a comment on James site:
“There would have been a time for such a word” (Macbeth.)
There would have been a time
When I could have juggled with concepts
And abstracts in mathamatical forms,
But not any more.
There would have been a time
For so many words
When esprit de l’escalier
Was as alien to me
As dancing on the moon.
When I had read Joyce
And Wittgenstein
And Einstein too,
And considered them easy reading
In a form of snobbery
I kept to myself.
There would have been a time,
Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow,
But to me there is no tomorrow
Only my yesterdays
Of lighted genius.
People called me that, ha!
How shallow it sounds now,
How much of a lie
A make-believe.
So much so, that only rarely do I hanker
After what I have lost
And what noble Macbeth hath won!
—
Terry.
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Ps my photos are on
http://community.webshots.com/user/terrycuthbert
And look out for Baldmikes on my favourite box, he’s a great photographer.
Comments (47)
I WISH I could just lay on the grass and look at the sky. I probably could but all this activity is so time consuming. Your free-verse sonnet was striking, i thought the beginning was ok but the ending was a definite good punch. for some reason i just feel like smashing airplanes now like when i was a kid. It is very sad when your lose family, losing my grandparents in the countryside of romania was very saddening but i still remember them and their songs. I actually never heard of Wittgenstein, i am going to look it up on wikipedia! Have a great day!
M.A.
I loved all of these…but your first poem reminds me of why I love the Moody Blues so much.
*And, please, let the Sarahs know I appreciate the comment on my motherhood…even if they don’t believe in my hocus-pocus…all this time I thought it only natural!*
Much Love, Terry, Darling…All Of You…GFW
If only these old bones could talk! What a story ! @-}-}-
35 years of great stuff.
Ah, the dialogues of one artist to another. I like that kinda stuff. Keep it copasetic. Peace.
God, in 1968 I was only 2 years old! Great poetry as always. Take care and enjoy the weekend!
What a wonderful place
i get a bit cheeky but i can imagine what goes on in the minds of those intoxicated 
but thats what i see and feel when i read it. I enjoy it LP !! Great works !!!

With the sun on my face
And the big unicorns
With their long sexy horns
Made to please the human race.
I like that last part of your poetry
At the Dig has that sense of mystery to what has been found and the last part to that poem it’s like a sign of appreciation to what was given to the lost soul who was left to die in pain where the spirit roams around desperately looking for a chance to be laid in peace ..hence the cross.
Oh who am i to say with what the poetry is trying to say
have a lovely weekend oh poetic one !!
I really love the last one. I can appreciate the concept of “there would have been a time”, I guess!
And the images in “The Bereaved” are so striking. I know it always seemed so odd to that it should be a beautiful, sunny day when I had lsot someone, as though the whole world, and even the earth, should be grieving with me. And it was bittersweet to realize that others’ lives were moving on, as mine had, once.
I like them all, old and new, can’t say I like one more than another, the Bereaved did strike a sad chord though. Had a nice time in England, just family, by the way, I was amazed that GB has STARBUCKS, it’s actually called COFFEE……………. I wonder what the three ladies would think of it..!! Maybe you too LP like Starbucks, I’ve become an Italian snob, coffee concerned.
Brilliant as always, love the last one!
Medieval movies aren’t everyone’s bag so certainly it’ll not interest a bunch of people. I really was a great movie though!
What kind of movies do you like?
Terry, we would not have spoken to one another then even as much as we do now. Today I stand in the shadow of who you are. I shudder to think how dim I would have been in your shadow then.
Ps in my free-verse sonnet there are only 13 lines that because I felt when re-reading it that one line did not have the right temperature, the right elan.
And movies? Comedies!
No one can hold a candle to you (else you would go up in flames). When I grow up I want to be just like you (only without so many names)
Hey! Nice Site! This is a new bloring, so if you believe in either Buddha or Jesus, please join!
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the above is one for the Three-heads to piss off!
Your brillance still shines
Nancy
All of them just superb! The first one…writtnen in 1968, it took me back to that era (notn exactly back cuz I wasnt born yet…lol) but it made me think of that time and picture it in my head as I read the poem. I like it when something can transport you to another time or place. You are a very gifted poet.
Thank you for sharing your pictures, Terry
<3 Sarah
Terry, Excellent as always.HUGS. Margot
thank you for you and your bird’s kind words. Reading what you write and post always makes me happy, gives me peace, and brings a smile to my face. It’s a wonder I don’t do it more often!
I started a literary and arts magazine at my school to encourage the talent that we (hopefully) have there… it’s kind of exciting. For every few people I expected to submit something I find a treasure from the least expected place.
Thanks Terry: on a weekend when I was half-considering dumping the whole thing – someone whose opinion I truly respect – handed out the kind of encouragement I needed. Yes, thanks. Next time I cross that ocean I’m coming to find you…
Thank you for such wonderful collections of words. I love “There would have been a time for such a word”.
I have given up reading as it strains my eyes to much, so i only get my reading on here, yours I enjoy ,and some of the other sites .I am not a cockney ,seldom use those rhyming things, only used that on to rhyme in the story I am a Londoner though, and although living here for 42 years I have not lost my London accent. I would like to speak Posh! as I call it, I can sometimes but usually revert to normal. Not very interesting I am afraid ,I am not in the mood today but felt I must visit a few people. Cheers Marj

I like all of these; the ones from your work let me see what you were reporting on in a much clearer view than even the story would be. I like the endings of the 2nd and 4th…just a hint of irony there, I think. Your Macbeth poem is great…except for the last line…Macbeth won death, but you have so much life left in your words.
“With their long sexy horns
Made to please the human race.”
i have always love unicorns but i never thought their thorns were sexy. heh. hmm. you gave me a better picture i guess.
awesome write as always.
regards.
Afraid I cannot pick a favorite this entry, I found it all quite amazing.
~V
You have been added to the list …
Wonderful.
I love these poems for their wittiness. Light, but meaningful. That’s a good balance. Keep it up!
Truly enjoyed these earlier poems. I especially like “The Bereaved” and “At the Dig”. Simple, yet emotional.
Went to Webshots and looked at a lot of your pictures, too. You were such a cutie when you were little—-not to say you aren’t now!! your grandson looks like he could be in a Tom Sawyer movie—has an impish look to him!
“Flower Child” brings about a sense of tranquility for me…
Ah, those who work in the Histology fields do claim that the bones speak to them…
I sympathize with the old woman in the demented man’s life…
The “Bereaved” is a sad poem, and gripping…
And yes, there would have been a time for such a word : MARVELOUS
leaving a stalk of dark rose,
-Elle
works of art lord i knew u had brainzzz whurs the City & the Stars poemmmmm ? luv magi/beckon/angel
Takes me back to childhood lying in the grass, haven’t done it for awhile. “There would have been a time” really makes me think of all the things that I plan but never get time to do- perhaps I should make the time. =)
~Mia*
I absolutely love your ‘freeverse sonnet’. I read it like 5 times over. And ‘the bereaved’ is excellant as well. Good work.
-Jos-
Love your style, man.
RYC: Ah, Terry. With Featured Content comes the spammers, the evangelists and the e-mail forward freaks. It’s not worth the extra traffic if you ask me.
oh you lovely you
i love the blackie poems.
ive had 100% no inspiration as of late. in fact, in a long time i have not had any.
perhaps it is the german washing the english out of my brain. now i have neither language quite at its best.
feel free to read my site, although in it is nothing of interest.
dont forget to floss,
-ja
I hope your health is getting better…. wonderful poems….have a great day
Wonderful as always, Terry. And I love the pictures. When I finally get the money to make my dream trip, I’m going to look you up.
Thanks for the information on the word! I wondered why many other only used the the to leave form of the word . Here in The US we would state “undocumented persons”. Funny I did not realize the polictical undertones although we have those here. they are well out in the open …see what we learn here on Xanga! Great conversation ! Karolyn @-}-}–
never would any of you – the clown, the lord, the bird, the asshole or any of the others ever be banned from my X – it’s an honor to even know you’re there
wish i would have read ya a long time ago smoke on
Ha ha…I like the first one, reminds me of my youth as well…oh maybe I shouldn’t share that.
“At the dig” makes me wonder if they were digging up a graveyard to build, or had found a body purposefully killed as a sacrafice to a building built back when that was popular practice.
“The bereaved” brings back many memories, like when my Dad died. Back then it wasn’t thought good practice to let children see people in Hospitals, so I never got to see my Dad before he died, never had that chance to say goodbye.
And finally ”There would have been a time for such a word” reminds me of my own shortcomings and failures to reach goals and dreams I had when I was younger.
Thanks Terry, now I am thouroughly depressed. Just kidding.
These are WONDERFUL. I’d be hard pressed to say which I found most arresting.
thanks very much for the comment, i very much enjoy reading your words as well…please, stop by anytime…
jase
not sure about the song…
Thrift shops rule. i’d still be shopping there even if I did have money…heh
-Jos-
I thoroughly enjoyed “Flower Child”. Since my release from the hospital, I’ve done a little bit bit of gardening, but mostly I’ve been “Sitting on my ass, just a smoking grass.” What a hoot!