September 28, 2004

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    But you don’t see me crying,
    tired of all the worry
    you have given me,
    never knowing where your hand
    will strike next
    on one of my late mother’s pots
    or across my face.

    But you don’t see me crying
    like piano hemidemisemiquavers,
    like onto a cold cobweb of a face
    long since lost it’s beauty
    hated by a mirror
    and any other vanity
    I once had before you married me
    and made me so ugly.

    But you don’t see me crying
    when I have to say to you
    that I love you,
    so the children will not wake again
    hearing your foul language
    and you threatening to kill me.

    But you don’t see me crying
    when someone tells me
    they have seen you kissing a girl
    half of my age,
    and you come back
    and near rape me
    you having locked the children
    inside their bedroom.

    But you don’t see me crying,
    oh no, oh no, oh no.

    And you never will,
    not even if I filled up the tea-pot
    with my tears.


    Tiffy Witherington.


    blog updated

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    As I climb the mountain and look down,

    I wonder if this is how heaven will be.

    For below me, far below the tree-level,

    A million voices cry upwards to be helped,

    A million sad people asking for that something

    To make their lives a little better.



    I sit on a rock, and run my panting fingers

    Inside my collar of God, and I look below

    And I hope their prayers can be answered.



    For their prayers are rarely for themselves,

    But for loved ones, those in trouble across the sea,

    And for hope and peace to replace the hatred.



    And I climb up to the summet of the mountain

    And I pray myself for the tears in the valley below.



    I suddenly realise I had not even left the church-hall,

    And yet the mountain was real to me.



    I had climbed the mountain of my heart

    A mountain higher, and with greater views,

    Than any earthly mountain I may ever ascend

    With map and bible in my rucksack.





    Rev Tobias Trontby.
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    Text Don’t give a trucker an easy cake.



    Feeling down on my duck, and tired of my boss saying we should put our sacks to the ball and pull our cocks up cos there’s no such thing as a tree crunch, I decided that enough is Abroath, and it was time to sack up and grieve and cry my sand elsewhere.



    I was shore I could shoe it, start a new wife, this time keeping my nose to the rindbone, and watch my ‘t’s and ‘u’s, for when the twit hits the scan, I want to be smiles away, for I am not the whack sleep of the family.



    “But bang on a blow, and toad your forces” he cried, not sleeting about the crutch, “you owe us a witty kenny before you get your thistle and see if the pass is meaner on the other side of the bill.”



    But I stuck to my runs and I cold him where to wet cloth, and left him to his gob and so he had to wet me ho, and here I spam at your floor, wanting you to give me a dance.





    Horace Spliff Esq.

     

    The Three_Headed_Sarahs are back from their own planet, visit them or be damned.

     

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    ‘Isn’t gravity a wonderful thing,

    Holding us all in place,

    Otherwise we’d just go “ping”,

    And head off for deepest space.’

     

    (b) Mervyn G. Powell.

    And NO, he’s NOT another of my personae, but a great poet met tonight. (28th September) Hope he joins Xanga! Terry.

     

    Updated this, it’ll be Saturday before I’m next here.

Comments (50)

  • Beautiful, as always…~Jaime~

  • those first two are amazing…the second one makes me realize the depth of faith, how one person can want so much for so many others..its completely selfless and that in it’s self is priceless

  • I was thinking yesterday how Toby reminds me of Father McKenzie from that Beatles song, but really he doesn’t. People do  listen to him.

    As to Tiffy’s work. Word.

  • Three great writings here.
    Of course, I like Rev. Toby the very best.

  • three wonderful pieces today, but i always love tiffy’s best. ~jacki

  • Wow, Tiffy amazed me today.

  • Outdid yourself today you did.  This “hemidemisemiquavers” is a word you don’t see often but I expect it of you.  Very good interjection in Tiffy’s poem.  Excellent.  Tiff is a strong one but today, it would be a cold day in hell before I would stay in a similar situation.  Women should never allow these types of things especially around children who grow up easily emulating the bad experience they grew accustomed to.

    Reverand Toby, his out of body experience with Bible in hand tells a story of someone who to me, “really has what a God would see as very fine qualities.  He is definitely a good man.  You wrote his existence and I think to write convincingly like this, you have to feel it, inside, yourself.  Good read, I like reads that make me feel good about a person and this one did, twice.

    The last poem was a hoot.  My husband laughed as he read it with me and he is a master of that type of word usage.  I tried to find a name for it but didn’t.   He had a habit of teasing me and the kids talking like that when he was in a silly mode.  I believe if you have a very stuffy nose, it falls like rain and he lives with allergies.  Very funny, the read, not his allergies.

  • I did visit the Three headed Sarahs, it is much better then be damned. ( I already am, I think).

  • outstanding!

    the first one could have been talking about my Mother who drank herself to death in 1973 at the age of 43….

    (btw….my daughter stayed in the hospital 2 months..she was born 3 months early….)

    love your site……..

  • what spectacular writing.  no wonder you’re lord of the pineapple.

  • an incredible threesome from terrified to delight…

  • tiffy did an amazing job as usual…the poem was filled with emotion very raw and real. i guess i’ll venture into the Sarah’s site for awhile

  • I don’t know why America is hung up on the pro-ana thing, thanks for the comment though! ~Jaime~

  • love the first one and oddly the last one :)   i agree with your comment on marks and sparks but the roses were lovely if not edible :)

    i would love you to send something in for the homework on that page ya know .. it would be fun :)

  • I miss Tiffy. Love the Rev’s words. He always makes me think. Three brilliant poems.

    Slainte!

  • I find myself in Tiffy a lot. I was never a beaten wife/lover, but I have been battered in the work place. You struck a chord today for when I was outmaneuvered, outnumbered and ambushed into losing my job, the last thing I said to my super was, “I won’t give you the satisfaction of seeing me cry!”. In fact I don’t think I did cry until one day I came across my album full of pictures of my babies spanning fifeteen years.

  • cruel love and wonder and sardonic humor.. always an interesting array of topics you share so well..  peace

  • i liked the second poem by the good Reverand….i needed something uplifting and it truly lifted me up…

  • What powerful work!

    Trust me when I say that I have doubts as well.  But I cant ignore the things that have happened to me. 

  • That’s pretty cheeky, but I suppose someone ought to capture some human liberation.

    There should be more nudists

  • good guess, my dear pineapple, good guess!

    but sadly wide of the mark.

    I rather think that a ‘towel’ might be the answer to the old ‘what gets wetter as it dries’ riddle.

    so no sex with me for you tonight, I’m afraid…

  • We must get together for a cuppa very soon.

  • It’s been some while since I’ve seem the word “hemidemisemiquaver” used well in a poem.

    No, I meant football not “futsball” as the kids here say.

    By the way, I also meant “lust” not “avarice/greed”. Give me a break, I can scarcely speak my native tongue. lol

    Pete

  • Have you ever read “The Beach Of Falesa”?  by Dylan Thomas?

    He was, don’t you know, without a doubt, the most celebrated poet of his generation?  :)

    lisa

  • p.s.

    i visited defydescription. 

    i’m:  tangled up in blue

  • The Reverend Trontby poem is magnificent! They’re each great poems, but the Rev’s poem really struck me.

    Peace.

  • Hey!

    Are you my mom’s friend? One time on somebody’s site they talked about you. I think it was your birthday.

    My brother is a real computer genius!

    See ya.

    Kirsten.

  • wow…powerful stuff from Tiffany…

  • Which of these poems are inspired by reality? 

    No, I am not a shopaholic.  I think I would be if I had more money. I do like malling though.  We usually make it an expirence by having coffee and strolling along just enjoying each others’ company.  We call this the “malling experience.”

  • and its your right to feel that way.

  • Incredible~Intriguing~As ever~haunting~

    Peace~

  • Heavy stuff, Lord P… heavy stuff.

    ~Leah

  • Spider,
    are you taking a shit,
    or building a home?

  • You seem in a sentimental mood lately… The poem by Tiffy is heart wrenching. You achieved well extracting my emotions. I read it twice even though it hurt me. The Horace piece; it was a blast to end the reading in a smile. They were in just the right order: painful. pius: playful
    I cannot seem to ICQ you- did you get my attempt? I tried to send you a poem for editing and critique. Good day, LOTBR.

  • DEAR lORD…FROM MT. TOP….EXTREME BLUE SKIES…SUN 10-100 TIMES BRIGHTER….HAS RAINBOW AURA…SO DOES MOON AND HEADLIGHTS…THANK YOU, FOR SIGHT….BLESSINGS,BECKON                 CALL

  • DAER LORD..GOT MEDICINE MAN.?….’WOUNDED KNEE’..i ASK FOR ONE BELIEVING i WILL RECEIVE ONE…IN jESUS NAME…AMEN…THANK YOU…..1951BC   BECKON CALL

  • Tiffy was soo sad.

  • Excellent poems today.  The last one is like the comment you left on my blog a couple days ago.  Took a while to figure it out, but worth the effort!  Kind of reminds me of Jabberwocky.

  • “hemidemisemiquavers”, may I have two please? I love this!

    Tracy

  • I like Tiffy’s poem. It’s the way a lot of people live.

  • powerful and brilliant, as ever  xo

  • Have your ears been ringing? That’s what we say here if we talk about someone to another. I told my neighbor how much Xanga means to me and how I would never have been acquainted with someone of your intelligence otherwise. I told her about your writings and she was amazed. Your fame is growing!! 

  • A deep day, indeed!

  • Dear Terry,

    As I get to know you more and more through your writings, I do very much understand the usage of the “characters”.  Tiffy Witherington’s poem could only have been written by her, and even though, I too, like very much the workd hemidemisemiquavers, my favorite lines are “hated by a mirror, and any other vanity.” The Reverend’s poem, likewise, can only have been written by him, and is a resounding explanation of faith. Wonderful words all.

    Michael F. Nyiri, poet,philosopher,fool

  • dear lord…i am lad somebody gets to write beautiful thing…an evil ALIEN broke my electric box…still useable,BUT…they are messing with my XANGA…X marked the spot ….hey???Do you in all of your infinate WISDOM know any “ONES” who may do an ALIEN TRICK and fix it for me….?I also like the REV..but TIFFYhmmm, in all actuallity I could be a THREE HEADED BIRD…i feel AKIN to them…how about some extra TREATS for them today…bless you as always…YOU never see to stop by anymore…and I had some REALLY SPIRIT INSPIRED stuff to throw own for contemplations….oh well…blessings,beckon call

  • Had to smile at Horace Squiff esq.Liked them all actually still all of yours are good ,no new words to describe them. Cheers Marj

  • I noticed that you’re reading Seamus Heaney poems, written and published before he became a nobel laureate for poetry.  I’m fond of telling the story that before he was famous, I attended a poetry reading of Mr. Heaney and sat very close to the armchair where he sat, enchanting me with his irish brogue.

  • thank you…it is beautiful…beckon call

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