January 2, 2005

  • First Poem of 2005



    I’ll soon by taking down the holly from the bar

    Putting the plastic Christmas tree back into the loft,

    Taking down the cards and placing them in a drawer

    Until the Spring clean.



    I don’t know why I bothered

    No one seemed to care,

    No one rang me up this morning

    To wish me a happy new year.



    Of course there are people worse off than me

    I’ve given a day’s takings to Oxfam relief

    And as I sit alone in my bed

    I thank the Lord that I am still alive

    With only a splitting head.







    Tiffy Witherington

    _______________________

     


    “I rediscovered the unworn world” (Patrick Kavanagh)



    Come easy to this unworn world,

    where life and death go un-treated;

    but where there is still the freshness,

    where there is still the unstale’d.



    It was never easy to see the world as new

    when one is their-self crusting old,

    when one has drank the wine of it’s soul

    and ate the plants of it’s dying light.



    But I know I have re-discovered you

    whenever I write a poem at all,

    whenever the clouds silk in cold

    or are baked in an oven of suns.



    An unworn world that’s still soaks life,

    billions of people each with different eyes

    that look in wonder out of different brains,

    and all using very different words.



    If I wore a crown every day

    I could not have so much power

    as when I touch a silver leaf

    or feel a redbrick factory.



    After all I have suffered in my days

    I still want to rise up again

    out of the ashes of silence,

    to re-discover the unworn world

    in the evening of my dreams,





    The Poet Known as “Empty Chairs”

    _____________________________

     


    “Stacey’s Poem”



    We did not celebrate Christmas this year

    Thomas is too small

    And I didn’t care.

    No one brought me presents

    I had no presents to buy,

    There were only the two of us,

    Baby Thomas and I.



    Next year Thomas will have a Christmas

    He’ll like the pretty lights

    And I’ll tell him it’s a special day

    When someone died to give us life.



    But this year we did not celebrate Christmas,

    There was no reason why,

    For no one else really cared

    For baby Thomas or I.


    (Not a new personae, just a poem about another lonely person.)

     

    _________________________

    Depressed after all that? Want Fun and laughter and irony? go to the Three_Headed_Sarahs site, but mind the slurry!


     

    ps: Sophie’s blog pages has reached number 7! http://sophielucymorgan.homestead.com/S7.html

     

    Sorry: Just in, latest Edition Scoope!

     


    Written for LordPineapple  (A true talent of Xangaland)…..



    The river of poetry flows in a somber fashion
    Penned by the hand of brilliance and flair
    Impersonating many egos, all colorful in ways
    With this, I give you sunshine in these words
    May your mourning become a beaming smile
    Your tearful raindrops be turned to radiance
    Cast your cares aside and revel in adoration
    Lavish upon us always, your poetical art…..


    Copyright © PoeticaC

     

    PoeticaC

Comments (52)

  • It’s a well-known fact that more people commit suicide during the Christmas season than any other time of the year. I think it is the remembrance of a long ago Christmas that makes us long for forgetfulness.

    I am off to see the girls now slurry and all.

  • Good poems. Yeah, depressing, but hey! loneliness happens.
    I hope you are well. Happy New Year. This will be a good one, Cheers!

  • Beautiful 1st poem of 2005. HAPPY NEW YEAR to you. My xmas tree wont be down till 6th Jan – another excuse to procrastinate.

    I also read Dec 31st’s entry …god I love Sophie and what she says and thinks. Keep  it up.

  • Wish more happiness and laughter had found its way in ………….

    Lonliness does make for great poetry, though.

  • great start to the new year terry…

  • i love the First peom of 2005 its great. =) thanks . . .for the post on my site. . . and a happy new year . . . to you.

  • HI terry
    I can do depressing
    your writing is so colorful and exact that
    if you had not mentioned depressing it would have just settled as another
    great write…which they all are.
    ((((HUGS))))

  • Pineapple, This is TheBOOOOYA! speaking.

    What’s the deal with you man? Do you not realize what friendship means?
    I dig you dude but I don’t care which one of your personalities typed on your computer.
    That is no excuse and I choose Pupil over you anyday. If you come to my home and
    speak that way towards my friends then we become non-friends. I don’t want that.
    If you do, then say so. You are a person who dares to be obtusely different and I do
    appreciate that. However, you do not yet know the ways of ThePOC. ThePupil is a much
    loved member of my carpet and I will not leave this issue alone until it is resolved.

    Perhaps you did not mean to be rude? Perhaps it was an attempt at a joke that went sour?
    Do not worry, I’ve had many of those. It does not matter either way. What does matter is that we
    move on. The only way that can happen is for you to let me know what you seek here on my carpet.
    Do you seek friendship or do you seek something else? What did you mean by your statement that
    has left many of us puzzled? My peachy carpet cannot be pulled from under our feet. I stapled it
    and glued it and made sure that it could never be budged. I will post this on your blog.

    -BOOOOYA!

  • Oh dear. I have Asperger’s, I try to be good, to show empathy but it falls. I am then like the Sarahs. I find it hard to show empathy of spirit as well as soul. My soul is my body, my spirit is this.

    I will say Sorry to anyone. Empathy is an extra strain on me, was ok before my stroke, now some of the time I forget spirits, and think “can I take the piss at unhumour. And this IS not a funny blog. I think you should stop the Sarahs’ and me from visiting here.

    I can keep up fiction like my soul but not keep up fact like you are fact by being real and thus outside my empathy easily.

    So you are alien like the Sarahs’ are alien to you.

    But I hope I can stick to fiction.

    Good-bye if that is your wish.

    Terry.

  • Sorry, the above about his blog ie on his blog as a sorry, and a sorry to everyone. I am a loser.

  • Oh, the pulling of the rug, sorry, carpet… and it’s code, it means aren’t you afraid some of these guys are USING you?

  • ie taking the piss more than even I? As I said, I am sorry, but that is me, I was never able to trust someone know how Asperger’s children see sex as normal love like marriage, not able to tell the difference.

    Until we grow up and trusts no one.

    I try, there are many here I do trust, more than the rest of my life added up together. I was never so trusting. Wait Boo-Boo, Yogi is going.

  • Hey Terry! I enjoyed your poems…I especially love the second one! I’m awed by your words as always…..

    By the way, the poem I wrote for you has been posted! Hope you like!

  • Ok, you can take the poem for here….I’m glad you enjoyed it. And yes I know about the trust thing…it doesn’t come easy to me either! LOL

  • May you tuck those warm words close to your saddened heart….

  • Modesty I have NEVER mastered! It is too tough an empathy!

  • Ok, who is Inky head? LOL

  • Terry, goodbye is NOT what I wish. Do not try and turn this around on me because it will not work.

    Goodbye is YOUR choice not mine.

    I extend my hand of friendship to you once again. All you have to do is grab it. It is your choice. Not mine.

    And you are mistaken about me and ThreeHeadedSarahs. You see, ThreeHeadedSarahs are in no way Alien to me. My friend, I am familiar with Aspergas. That is not a problem for me. I, perhaps more than most, understand you. I see you have to learn how we interact and simulate it -in your own way. It isn’t a natural trait for you as it is for everyone else here. However just because I understand you does not mean that I will let slide what you said to Pupil. I hope you understand.

    (TheBOOOOYA! extends his hand of friendship towards LordPineapple and says..)

    Now, Trust me when I say these words to you: I accept you and I will call you a freind until you tell me otherwise.

    -BOOOOYA!

  • I enjoyed the poems…the the one on the Sarah’s site as well. I hope you have a wonderful 2005 Terry!

  • Hey Terry, I added an edit stating that I wrote the poem to cheer you up! Hope it worked!

  • Who is tiffy witherington? – that name sounds familiar to me

  • Love means never having to say you’re sorry :) Depression means always having to say you’re sorry :) Happy is as happy does. Happy New Year, Terry. Ain’t love grand?

  • A happy and cheerful new year to you.!!!

  • thank you for the comment.
    oh wow. your writings are fab!

  • Stacy’s poem is sad, and yet there is a hope for the new baby. 

  • Oh, no doubt in my mind. I own Buddy Holly’s entire collection on CD. I love the guy.

  • This is truly a very nice mixture of your poetry and others.

  • Hey Terry – the poems are wonderful.  I love the way you have with words!

  • Shit!  Haha!  Thank the lord I suppose. 

  • A lot of bandinage in your comments today why don’t [people just read them as I do i either like them or i don’t but it is not up to me to jusge some are better than others I liked what Poetica said  on yours Cheers Marj P.S I never answer on my own comments, as I never expect people to go back and see ,of course it takes longer to go to each ones site, but I get there eeventually

  • all that meant is theres a protected post up – i added you

  • You may think a bit diff if you saw the scars of my surgery lol (round about april 7th onwards on my site) if they said 200% chance of recurring i wouldnt cos ithurt like hell and left me with 1/2 belly button

  • Wow!  Thanks for the sub!  I’m honored! :D

    How’s your leg?

  • Dear Terry,

    Slogging through the comments on this was almost better than reading the poetry.  I liked all of the poems in this post, but I think the first one, by Tiffy, got to me the most. I did like Empty Chair’s line: “billions of people each with different eyes.”

    Michael F. Nyiri, poet, philosopher, fool

  • thanks for your comment :) dont be lonely at xmas email me and i wi ll ring you up :) Lol

  • We almost had a Stacey’s poem Christmas this year, but I refused. We did it up even if the baby doesn’t understand.

  • I loved “I rediscovered the unworn world” (Patrick Kavanagh) – but all of them are wonderful 

  • I love these.  A brilliant start to a new year Lord P.  What part of TX will you be visiting?  Let me know when you are going and I might go visit my mum (TexasTwinkies) so I can meet you.  You will love it. 

  • Still wondering who Tiffy Witherington is…

    Can i ask… do you only put poetry here – or do you  have another site where you write about life, and all the stuff like that

  • Christ did not celebrate Christmas either.
    The lights of the celebrating people make it painfuller for the ones in the dark.

  • I don’t pretend when I say this. You should honestly submit your poems. Honestly. Why don’t you? You should send them everywhere you can think of. Print mag’s. Ezines. Everywhere.

    ~lisa

  • you are great

    i really need to find the pool inside me on which to drink from to write about all these things,

    for mostly i write about cataclysmic events but not enough about simple day to day things.

    Happy New Year !

    John

  • Terry you aren’t a loser (referring to your first comment in rebuttle to Boooya)

    You’re an absolutely amazing writer who can use all the different personalities and egos, simply because you do it so well. And yes, although those poems are depressing, they’re beautiful, like you.

    Sarah

  • Oh, Terry!… the Holidays suck if you don’t have kids minds to lie to and fool with or a gathering to get lost in… I love the first poem!

    and regarding the comments… you most certainly do have empathy!  You are an incredibly complex and passionate man!  And if you EVER think of going away… we shall find you and make you post!  :o P  (laughing)  Be well my friend!  (((Hugs!)))

  • great stuff and an amazing tribute: A Merry New Year to all of your voices…

  • RYC:  It’s all left over crap right now – once I get the shelves clear and post the good stuff… I’ll post a link.  Cheers!

  • The internet connection is really making me lose my patience but i wont !!

    As i posted earlier before the internet connection went I said, i like your poems, your work, the words you pen on your site. Though i have no intellectual words to express more i can only say i enjoy visiting your site and leaving my comments. I hope and wish 2005 be a better year for you, for me and for all of us.

    Happy New Year!!

  • hope your holidays were great…huggs…Sassy

  • The last poem is an introduction ( at the end ) of those above . I liked very much those poems who express a kind of human distress in front of the loneliness and a dream of a perfect world like the heavens .

    You are hard with the anglo saxon world Terri . I am not . Do you know Alfred de Musset I quote was an admirer of the grand Lord Byron ( an English romantic poet ) . And at any time you make me think f Byron .

    In friendship   Michel

  • I liked Stacey’s poem the most…such hope amidst sadness!

  • Lord have a blessed New Year   magi/beckon angel

  • How ARE you….??

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