November 29, 2004

  • Decided to put the Terry poem on the The_Clowne_from_Clown  site. Though any comments left here will be answered by this blog.


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    Death Of The Reverend D.H. Smith.



    He hung himself yesterday,

    The vicar who had lost his faith,

    He who had seen one child too many killed

    By a Christian soldier.



    He had hung himself on the bell-rope,

    It had rung once

    And then was silent.



    He was a good man,

    A kind man

    Who could take no more hyprocrisy

    From a Labour leader who goes to church

    And who had given orders

    To destroy a people.



    He hung himself yesterday,

    Did the Reverend D.H. Smith.



    When I went to his parish

    To see his weeping wife;

    A mass of flowers had been placed

    At the lynch-gate

    By a people who still believed

    In a distant God.





    Rev Tobias Trontby +

     

    __________________

     

    “In Somebody’s House”



    We sat in somebody’s house,

    Just talking,

    You and I

    As we rarely did

    After those first few months

    Of infatuation.



    We sat there in somebody’s house,

    In love and holding hands

    And talking about our dreams.



    You were as you was back then, you know,

    Handsome, lively, always ready to listen.

    It was the time you only used your fist

    To clench a glass,

    And your size-12 boot

    To sway on your knee

    In the gentle rhythm of your Welsh voice.



    We were in somebody’s house,

    Just talking.



    And yes, it was a dream.

    It had to have been a dream,

    A dream like the dream

    That quicky died

    Once I was your slave,

    And you my master…



    Except perhaps

    When we were in somebody’s house,

    And butter wouldn’t melt

    In that fucking mouth of yours.





    Tiffy Witherington.

     

    __________________

     

Comments (57)

  • The first one really hit me hard. 

  • Bitter disappointments and hypocricies –and the slave/master relationship shown in this last poem….

  • Sad ones today, powerful ones, too.

    Regarding your comment on my blog:  Lake Michigan only has tiny tides.  Figured to be only between 1/2 to 1 1/2 inch.  Large tides are only in the oceans–they need large masses of water.  Had to go do a search on-line to find all this out.  So now I am smarter, thanks to you!!  Never had thought about it before.

  • Powerful stuff all around today.  Intense … strong … gripping … these are the words that hit my mind as I read along.  The forcefullness of such which leaves me in a dazed and confused state.

    As always … excellent work adorns these pages!

  • Very good I felt so sorry for the second one as there seems to be so much of it around these days. Clever as usual Cheers Marj

  • I know you think you are a failed writer. But from the highly imaginative stuff I have read of yours, I wonder why the world has not noticed. Reading your work is like falling down the rabbit hole. I feel like you could be a modern day Lewis Carroll or that guy that wrote Richard Crory (I don’t know if I remembered the title right… the poet escapes me at the moment).

  • I loved these two. You are amazing LP
    You make my day because you write great stuff that I can only think about.
    You really are amazing. Dont forget that

  • the death of reverend smith is a thought provoking piece…nicely done…

  • Nice selections.

    And whatever do you mean that the Sarah’s are scared of me?

  • have i asked who tiffy witherington is? well, i wanna know.

  • how do you get the pic next to the comment like that?

  • Tiffy’s last words blew me away….

    Pelican Pie…oh, Terry, you ARE the one tsk, tsk, tsk!!!!

  • The first one left me with a question, why. The second one was rather disturbing and yet so true. Brilliant Work milord

    RYC: Twin Peaks, that show is mind-boggling for me from the beginning to the end but i enjoyed it!!

  • Wow, the first one was seriously wicked powerful.  The second was quite the piece too.

  • I looked on the map, and Clowne isn’t too far from our friends.  They live E. of Doncaster, in Haxey, (Home of the Haxey Hood—have you heard of this tradition?).  Not too far S. of Epworth.

  • Thank you for stopping by my site, and the lovely stanza you left. I am greatly flattered a Poet as seasoned and powerful as yourself commented on my works. I love your writings, especially The Death Of The Reverand D. H. Smith. It is eerily gorgeous. I hope you don’t mind I subscribe to you so I can remember your site and the enticing poems….have a good week ahead anyway.

  • they are both lovely; the first is rather sad and second reminds me of a strange dream…i dunno why. lol, i am not a genius…both in and out of school! thanx anyway

  • The first poem was a touch sad, but I liked them.  Have a good one.

  • Two wonderfully well-written poems, once again.  You are amazing!

    ryc:  I worked in a convenience store and was asked (1) if I spoke English and (2) if I accepted pesos.  When a woman I know told friends in Connecticut that she was moving here, her friends asked it she needed to obtain a passport and shots!!!!  When I visited Alabama and told a woman I lived in NM, she told me she didn’t know whites lived here!!!  Scarey, isn’t it?  When people visit the motel and tell me they want ethnic food for dinner, I ask them which one? LOL  (Here, with the ratio being Hispanic/Anglo *yeah, we aren’t called caucasions here* being 40/40 *10%Other*, I figure White is an ethinicity, too. hahahaha)

    Much Peace and Love, my dear Lord…GFW

  • The truth you write in your poetry slams like a hammer into ones soul…you really got it down..you really feel it

  • Gosh, wonderful…~Jaime~

  • Wow…those were really powerful…they make you think about a lot of stuff…although people of the  society of today don’t seem to do thinking anymore…it’s nice to know someone does…bye…

    ~*~jayneygrl05-Candace~*~ 

  • i like the scond poem. a lot.

    -sarah

  • You know as well as I that there is no “distant god” there is only the god inside of us. Some believe god is vengeful and others believe he is merciful. The former would be the bullys in this world who are always fighting about things, and the latter are the meek who will, unfortunately, have to die to someday inherit the earth. Many times the meek will allow the vengeful god to make them suffer the way their ‘saviour’ suffered. I changed a title of a poem once because you didn’t like it. I didn’t either, really, but it was very apt. “Be Your Own Saviour”. You’ve just been writing so much that it’s lost its therapeutic value.

    Of course I could be wrong.

  • ~You have truly mastered the art of soul in character~never losing the grasp~

    ~Beyond this, you remain the undisputed King of  Irony~

    ~Brilliant~Poignant~

    ~Peace~

  • What has this to do with cheese?? In confusion

  • “quicky?”
    the death of….is powerful. i know someone else who should
    read this. you know the one that speaks of “shock and awe.”

    then there is Tiffy. who i relate to all too well that it is frightening.
    how do you writer her i wonder, being a man? you do write from
    her perspective so well as if you are experiencing the same.

    thanks for the comment on the pics. i am not fond of doing that
    but just this one time i guess. i prefer not to be that personal. and
    people ask if i have a boy too but my boy refuses to have his photo
    taken and i don’t force that. he says that smiling for a camera is like
    showing someone what they want to see and not what you truly are.

    take care friend.

  • I believe you have seen the young, steadfastly Christian boy who beleieves that “God” has all your life planned out and that he will come to you and lay it all out in plain sight – you just gotta keep listening to people that Preach and Judge and Condescend simulataneously in a “House of God” weekly.  The Creator is in us all and everywhere else.  We keep humble and love one another with respect to same, and we won’t see The Light of the World as light trying to escape from a collapsed star; trillions of light-years away.  You captivate me, Lord of the Prickly Fruit.  I will have something nerw on my site soon.  Thank you so much for taking an interest in me – your kindness honours me.  May Peace reign within wherever you dwell.

  • oh! my!

    scathing….

  • All I can say is you well deserved the recognition on the last contest at Neuroticfitchmom’s.  You hit it on the head in so many ways with so many characters.  The hanging was a tortured event and Tiffy’s read today was another of her cries of lament for battered women in general.  Good stuff written by a look into the problems of the world and an ability to put it all on paper.

  • terry your writing …sends me to places … where I experience so many things…and just one of your pieces keeps me spell bound 

    you are dangerous…I would spent too much time here… lol

    now … if you were just a hack…that would be no problem… five min. a quick observation and i could be off.

    perhaps ..if i just read one…nahh its like just having one chip…you always want more..

    I will come over soon on a empty stomach and just gorge myself

    that will be fun!

    Doug

  • *gasp* that man has some nerve!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yes those alien creatures on my page do have a hypnotizing effect on whoever stops by.. It’s working! =)

  • Tiffy …gotta love that poem…
    you always capture my attention

  • Everyone who knows and loves Terry : please visit this site and leave him
    a note of encouragement. What are friends for if not to lift you up.

    http://www.xanga.com/private/home.aspx?user=FriendsNotesToTerry

  • sorry people please try this:

    Terry

    Anyone want to post this link on their own site and pass the word around
    it would be well appreciated. Let’s send this Brit a message.

  • i still believe in God…though His distance is gaged by the individual, not God ~ jack

  • Stunningly excellent poems… as always. You know I really enjoy the perspective of the Rev. Those poems put me in awe.

    Peace.

  • Thank you Terry… brilliant as always… the second… I will carry with me for awhile.  I adore your writing!  (((hugs)))

  • Poor Reverend, had he been a Catholic Reverend he should never done that.
    He would perhaps had lost his faith but he never hang himself.
    If one looses his faith, look for something else…even poetry could be ok.

  • The first one is heart wrenching.

    But the second one is heart crushing.

    ~lisa

  • i like them both, thought the second hits closer to home i guess, at least at this point in my life…

  • You’re brilliant have I said that enough? I think not, you can never say it enough, so I say it again…and of course again with the next.

    ~V

  • Both poems about sacrifice to power. Nothing is gained, but what great potential is lost. I haven’t been around lately, but I notice people seem to think you need cheering. Consider yourself hugged. Honestly, I look forward to reading your poetry because it is so full of the truth. Keep writing…I will keep reading.

  • thank you for your wisdom my lord and your right to say to keep writing even if i am gone from this realm, i know the feeling of picking up a pen after a long delay.  and you must know by now the Rev speaks in a golden tone, it strikes like a heavy hand of thoughts, beautiful words i would say they are not.

  • SO SAD IT IS A SHAME LORD WHEN MEN OF CLOTHS HAVE TO DIE  LOVE THE REV   THANK YOU  ANGEL/JC  * l *

  • lots of rope …

    out here

  • Thank you! I have been fairly busy lately as my father is worsening. Cancer really sucks. I do hope to be able to post more often very soon. I’m gonna try to at least bump it up to once every four or five days.

    Peace.

  • RYC: bingo on hag, but I am glad you asked.

  • what do you mean by “spell your f’s funny”?

  • oh, and by the way, love happens. if you open your eyes.

  • oh, yeah and thanks for telling me about the profile pics thing.

  • You are SO invited to be part of my elf fleet, so hoooray for you, little man, hoooray.

  • That sounds like an interesting place. Yes…I love to be in places, where it would appear you are alone…but you really are not. I find peace in places like that… thank you for your comment. Much love to you…. Take care..

    D.

  • Distant God…that blew me away. And Tiffy’s poem is fantastic….as powerful and a sure as a punch in the gut.

  • I’ve been reading your site for a few months now, but I don’t recall commenting on it. Periculosus_Z (my brother) turned me on to your poetry. I’m not very good at this blogging stuff, but my brother insists that I use it to further explore my creativity. You’re a gifted writer and you’re witty and funny as well. I always enjoy reading your sites. Take care.

    ~Shelby.

  • great pieces…welcome back terry…

  • wow you suck. lol jk visit my xanga!

    Now that sux

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